Update feed article

_posts/2022-07-23-rss-atom-feed-in-new-tab.md

@@ -4,10 +4,16 @@ author: rubenwardy
 layout: post
 description: >-
   This article will tell you how you can add an Atom, RSS, or JSON feed to your
-  New Tab page using Renewed Tab.
+  Firefox / Chrome New Tab page using Renewed Tab.
 images:
   cover:
     path: howto-feeds/cover.png
+  unlock:
+    path: howto-feeds/unlock.png
+    caption: Edit mode button found on the bottom-right of the screen
+  permissions:
+    path: howto-feeds/permissions.png
+    caption: Permission request link
   sources:
     path: howto-feeds/sources.png
     caption: Sources table in the Edit Feed dialog
@@ -23,22 +29,42 @@ images:
 
 
 This article will tell you how you can add an Atom, RSS, or JSON feed to your
-New Tab page using Renewed Tab. Multiple feeds can be shown using tabs or
-combined into a single list, ordered by post-creation time. It supports article
-images and feed icons.
+Firefox / Chrome New Tab page using Renewed Tab. This allows you to keep up to
+date with the news and your favourite websites.
+
+Renewed Tab's Feed widget supports showing one or more feeds, using tabs or
+combined into a single list. It also supports showing article thumbnails and
+feed icons.
+
+If you haven't already, you'll need to install Renewed Tab
+([Chrome]({{ site.chrome }}&utm_content=post),
+[Firefox]({{ site.firefox }}&utm_content=post)).
 
 
-### Add the Feed widget
+## Add a Feed Widget
 
 Unlock Renewed Tab by clicking the pencil icon, click "+ Add Widget", and then
-click Feed. There will now be a new Feed widget on your page. You can now hover
-over the widget to move and resize it.
+click Feed. There will now be a new Feed widget on your page. Hover over the
+widget to move and resize it.
+
+{% include figure.html img=page.images.unlock %}
 
 
-### Edit sources
+## Permissions
 
-The next step is to add sources to the widget. Whilst in Edit mode, hover
-over the widget and click the pencil. This will open an Edit Feed dialog modal.
+Renewed Tab is designed with privacy in mind, so requires as few permissions as
+possible. You'll need to grant permission to access each feed source in order
+for the widget to work. Whilst in Edit mode, hover over the widget and click
+the pencil. This will open an Edit Feed dialog modal.
+
+
+{% include figure.html img=page.images.permissions %}
+
+
+## Edit Sources
+
+The next step is to add and remove sources. Open the Feed's edit dialog and look
+at the Sources table.
 
 {% include figure.html img=page.images.sources %}
 
@@ -57,7 +83,7 @@ Renewed Tab has a collection of popular feeds available, you can click an empty
 URL field to see them in a dropdown.
 
 
-### Filtering Articles
+## Filtering Articles
 
 You can filter articles based on whether they have or don't have a search
 phrase. This is especially useful when you want to hide a particular topic.
@@ -71,7 +97,7 @@ Search text is case-insensitive.
 {% include figure.html img=page.images.filter %}
 
 
-### Other Options
+## Other Options
 
 "Combine sources into single tab" will show all the feed sources in one list,
 rather than giving each its own tab.
@@ -89,7 +115,7 @@ the same as ctrl+clicking or middle-clicking a link.
 {% include figure.html img=page.images.icons %}
 
 
-### Conclusion
+## Conclusion
 
 Renewed Tab has a simple but flexible feed widget, allowing you to keep up to
 date with the news and your favourite websites. If you need any help or have