Fix wording and grammar mentioned in issue #23

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Nathan Hare 2015-09-02 10:51:13 -04:00 committed by rubenwardy
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<div class="line"></div> <div class="line"></div>
<h1 id="texture-packs">Texture packs</h1> <h1 id="texture-packs">Texture packs</h1>
<div class="row">
<div class="col-sm-6">
<h3>Popular Texture Packs</h3>
<ul>
<li><a href="https://forum.minetest.net/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=9564">PureBDTest</a></li>
<li><a href="https://forum.minetest.net/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=1583">HDX Textures</a></li>
<li><a href="https://forum.minetest.net/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=4990">PixelBOX</a></li>
</ul>
</div>
</div>
<p> <p>
Find <a href="https://forum.minetest.net/viewforum.php?f=4">texture packs</a> on the forums. Find more <a href="https://forum.minetest.net/viewforum.php?f=4">texture packs</a> on the forums.
<!-- TODO: Make a gallery of popular packs --> <!-- TODO: Make a gallery of popular packs -->
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<p class="intro"> <p class="intro">
You may also want to look at some <a href="https://forum.minetest.net/viewforum.php?f=15">subgames</a>. Subgames form a foundation for the game using Lua scripts. Different subgames have different objectives, such as survival, building or Player vs Player. You may also want to look at some <a href="https://forum.minetest.net/viewforum.php?f=15">subgames</a>. Subgames form a foundation for the game using Lua scripts. Different subgames have different objectives, such as survival, building or Player vs Player.
Usually Minetest comes with <a href="https://github.com/minetest/minetest_game">minetest_game</a>, to supply the default items and blocks. Usually Minetest comes with <a href="https://github.com/minetest/minetest_game">minetest_game</a>, to supply the default items and blocks. After you've tried Minetest you might want to try some mods or subgames.
</p> </p>
<p class="intro"> <p class="intro">
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<li><a href="https://apps.fedoraproject.org/packages/minetest">Fedora</a></li> <li><a href="https://apps.fedoraproject.org/packages/minetest">Fedora</a></li>
<li><a href="http://software.opensuse.org/package/minetest">openSUSE</a></li> <li><a href="http://software.opensuse.org/package/minetest">openSUSE</a></li>
<li><a href="http://mageia.madb.org/package/show/name/minetest">Mageia</a></li> <li><a href="http://mageia.madb.org/package/show/name/minetest">Mageia</a></li>
<li><a href="https://www.archlinux.org/packages/?q=minetest">Arch Linux</a></li>
<li><a href="http://packages.gentoo.org/package/games-action/minetest">Gentoo</a></li> <li><a href="http://packages.gentoo.org/package/games-action/minetest">Gentoo</a></li>
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<h1 id="about">About</h1> <h1 id="about">About</h1>
<p> <p>
<strong>Minetest is a near-infinite-world block sandbox game and a game engine</strong>, inspired by InfiniMiner, Minecraft and the like. <strong>Minetest is a near-infinite-world block sandbox game and a game engine</strong>, inspired by InfiniMiner, Minecraft, and the like.
</p> </p>
<p> <p>
Minetest is available natively for Windows, OS X, GNU/Linux, Android, FreeBSD, and is Free/Libre and Open Source Software, released under the LGPL 2.1 or later. Minetest is available natively for Windows, OS X, GNU/Linux, Android, and FreeBSD. It is Free/Libre and Open Source Software, released under the LGPL 2.1 or later.
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<h1 id="features">Features</h1> <h1 id="features">Features</h1>
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<div class="col-lg-4"> <div class="col-lg-4">
<h4>Multiplayer support</h4> <h4>Multiplayer support</h4>
<p>Play locally with your friends, or play online with dozens of players on a server.</p> <p>Play iby yourself, locally with your friends, or online with dozens of players on a server.</p>
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<div class="col-lg-4"> <div class="col-lg-4">
<h4>Multiple <em>subgames</em></h4> <h4>Multiple <em>subgames</em></h4>