English readmes:

* Updated 'Contents of Warzone 2100', 'State of the game' and 'Reporting Bugs'


git-svn-id: svn+ssh://svn.gna.org/svn/warzone/trunk@5213 4a71c877-e1ca-e34f-864e-861f7616d084

doc/Readme.en

@@ -15,14 +15,15 @@ Content
 
 1. Contents of Warzone 2100
 ===========================
-Warzone 2100, released in 1999 and developed by Pumpkin Studios,
+Warzone 2100, released in 1999 and developed by Pumpkin Studios, was a ground-
-was a groundbreaking and innovative 3D real-time strategy game.
+breaking and innovative 3D real-time strategy game.
+
 In 2004 Eidos, in collaboration with Pumpkin Studios, decided to release
 the source for the game under the terms of the GNU GPL, including everything
 but the music and in-game video sequences.
 
 Additionally all multiplayer-maps that were available in Warzone 2100 1.10,
-the last official patch by Pumpkin Studios, are available in Warzone 2100 as
+the last official version by Pumpkin Studios, are available in Warzone 2100 as
 well.
 
 2. State of the game
@@ -31,17 +32,17 @@ After the liberation of the Warzone 2100 source-code on December 6th, 2004, all
 proprietary technologies had been replaced with open-source-counterparts.
 
 Right now supported platforms are GNU/Linux, Mac OS X 10.4 (Tiger) and Windows
-(98 - XP). There are reports that Warzone 2100 is working on BSD, too. Some
+(98 - XP). There are reports that Warzone 2100 is working on BSD, too. While 
-people even run it under Windows Vista, which is not directly supported.
+Warzone 2100 may work under Windows Vista it is not supported by us.
 
-The game is still in a beta-state, so do not expect the game to run without any
+The game is becoming more and more stable over time, but you should not expect
-issues.
+the game to run without any issues.
 
 2.1 Reporting Bugs
 ------------------
 This game still has bugs and if you run into one, please use the bugtracker
 (https://gna.org/bugs/?group=warzone) to report this bug. In order to faster fix
-those bugs the developers require that you follow these rules:
+those bugs we require that you follow these rules:
 
    1. If the game crashes you may save a memory dump. Please do so and upload it
       when reporting the bug. (Linux locates that file at /tmp/warzone2100.gdmp)
@@ -206,4 +207,4 @@ Warzone2100.de (German):
 http://warzone2100.de/
 
 AUTHOR: Kreuvf (kreuvf@warzone2100.de)
-LAST UPDATE: 2008/05/25
+LAST UPDATE: 2008/06/04

doc/Readme.en.xhtml

@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
    <h2 id="contents">Contents of Warzone 2100</h2>
    <p>Warzone 2100, released in 1999 and developed by Pumpkin Studios, was a groundbreaking and innovative 3D real-time strategy game.</p>
    <p>In 2004 Eidos, in collaboration with Pumpkin Studios, decided to release the source for the game under the terms of the GNU GPL, including everything but the music and in-game video sequences.</p>
-   <p>Additionally all multiplayer-maps that were available in Warzone 2100 1.10, the last official patch by Pumpkin Studios, are available in Warzone 2100 as well.</p>
+   <p>Additionally all multiplayer-maps that were available in Warzone 2100 1.10, the last official version by Pumpkin Studios, are available in Warzone 2100 as well.</p>
    <div class="rt">
     <p><a href="#top">back to top</a></p>
    </div>
@@ -55,11 +55,11 @@
 
    <h2 id="gamestate">State of the game</h2>
    <p>After the liberation of the Warzone 2100 source-code on December 6th, 2004, all proprietary technologies had been replaced with open-source-counterparts.</p>
-   <p>Right now supported platforms are GNU/Linux, Mac OS X 10.4 (Tiger) and Windows (98 - XP). There are reports that Warzone 2100 is working on BSD, too. Some people even run it under Windows Vista, which is not directly supported.</p>
+   <p>Right now supported platforms are GNU/Linux, Mac OS X 10.4 (Tiger) and Windows (98 - XP). There are reports that Warzone 2100 is working on BSD, too. While Warzone 2100 may work under Windows Vista it is not supported by us.</p>
-   <p>The game is still in a beta-state, so do not expect the game to run without any issues.</p>
+   <p>The game is becoming more and more stable over time, but you should not expect the game to run without any issues.</p>
 
    <h3 id="bugreporting">Reporting Bugs</h3>
-   <p>This game still has bugs and if you run into one, please use the <a href="https://gna.org/bugs/?group=warzone" title="Bugtracker for Warzone 2100" hreflang="en">bugtracker</a> to report it. In order to fix those bugs faster, the developers require that you follow these rules:</p>
+   <p>This game still has bugs and if you run into one, please use the <a href="https://gna.org/bugs/?group=warzone" title="Bugtracker for Warzone 2100" hreflang="en">bugtracker</a> to report it. In order to fix those bugs faster, we require that you follow these rules:</p>
    <ol>
     <li>If the game crashes you may save a memory dump. Please do so and upload it when reporting the bug. (Linux locates that file at /tmp/warzone2100.gdmp) A self created backtrace is just as useful.</li>
     <li>Give as much information about what you were doing before the crash/bug occured.</li>
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ neos_symphonie_du_vide.ogg
    <div id="fileinfo">
     <ul>
      <li>AUTHOR: <a href="mailto:kreuvf@warzone2100.de">Kreuvf</a></li>
-     <li>LAST UPDATE: 2008/05/25</li>
+     <li>LAST UPDATE: 2008/06/04</li>
     </ul>
    </div>
   </div>