From 9e234e36c6459b5f00728edcbbab7784efd7501b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nathan Hare Date: Wed, 2 Sep 2015 10:51:13 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Fix wording and grammar mentioned in issue #23 --- customize.html | 14 +++++++++++++- downloads.html | 3 ++- index.html | 6 +++--- 3 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/customize.html b/customize.html index ec813c8..486b791 100644 --- a/customize.html +++ b/customize.html @@ -154,7 +154,19 @@ More subgames are available

Texture packs

+ +
+ +
+

- Find texture packs on the forums. + Find more texture packs on the forums.

diff --git a/downloads.html b/downloads.html index 06fc712..0e8c938 100644 --- a/downloads.html +++ b/downloads.html @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ redirect_from:

You may also want to look at some subgames. Subgames form a foundation for the game using Lua scripts. Different subgames have different objectives, such as survival, building or Player vs Player. - Usually Minetest comes with minetest_game, to supply the default items and blocks. + Usually Minetest comes with minetest_game, to supply the default items and blocks. After you've tried Minetest you might want to try some mods or subgames.

@@ -76,6 +76,7 @@ redirect_from:

  • Fedora
  • openSUSE
  • Mageia
  • +
  • Arch Linux
  • Gentoo
  • diff --git a/index.html b/index.html index 2e65581..df91ba9 100644 --- a/index.html +++ b/index.html @@ -19,11 +19,11 @@ redirect_from:

    About

    - Minetest is a near-infinite-world block sandbox game and a game engine, inspired by InfiniMiner, Minecraft and the like. + Minetest is a near-infinite-world block sandbox game and a game engine, inspired by InfiniMiner, Minecraft, and the like.

    - Minetest is available natively for Windows, OS X, GNU/Linux, Android, FreeBSD, and is Free/Libre and Open Source Software, released under the LGPL 2.1 or later. + Minetest is available natively for Windows, OS X, GNU/Linux, Android, and FreeBSD. It is Free/Libre and Open Source Software, released under the LGPL 2.1 or later.

    Features

    @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ redirect_from:

    Multiplayer support

    -

    Play locally with your friends, or play online with dozens of players on a server.

    +

    Play iby yourself, locally with your friends, or online with dozens of players on a server.

    Multiple subgames