diff --git a/manual/manual.adoc b/manual/manual.adoc index 537123bc..3674cc8f 100644 --- a/manual/manual.adoc +++ b/manual/manual.adoc @@ -10,12 +10,13 @@ image::../graphics/titlepic/titlepic.png[Freedoom Title Image,align="center",wid == Installing Freedoom -Freedoom is distributed as two files named `freedoom1.wad` and `freedoom2.wad` -which contain the artwork, levels, music and sound effects that make up the game. -To be played it needs to be paired with a source port. Fans of the original Doom -games have created a number of these; the Doom Wiki’s -https://doomwiki.org/wiki/Source_port[source ports page] has a comprehensive -list. The following are some good default suggestions: +Freedoom is distributed as two files named `freedoom1.wad` and +`freedoom2.wad` which contain the artwork, levels, music and sound +effects that make up the game. To be played it needs to be paired +with a source port. Fans of the original Doom games have created a +number of these; the Doom Wiki’s +https://doomwiki.org/wiki/Source_port[source ports page] has a +comprehensive list. The following are some good default suggestions: * https://zdoom.org[GZDoom] is a modern source port that includes various features such as a hardware renderer. @@ -570,14 +571,14 @@ suggestions: easier for you to target. It also encourages monster in-fighting; if done effectively, they’ll spend their energy killing each other and you’ll save on ammunition. - -* If you encounter a horde of flesh worms or stealth worms, The angle grinder is a - great weapon to use both to conserve ammo and avoid taking damage. - Worms can't attack while being sawed, and if you back - into any corner that is roughly as wide as or narrower than a right angle, - they can only come at you - one at a time. The angle grinder also works well on trilobites: they can't attack - while taking damage from it. + +* If you encounter a horde of flesh worms or stealth worms, The angle + grinder is a great weapon to use both to conserve ammo and avoid + taking damage. Worms can’t attack while being sawed, and if you + back into any corner that is roughly as wide as or narrower than a + right angle, they can only come at you one at a time. The angle + grinder also works well on trilobites: they can’t attack while + taking damage from it. <<< @@ -665,16 +666,16 @@ number of cheats that you can turn to: == Contributing to Freedoom == -Freedoom is a +Freedoom is a https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html[free content] -project contributed to by many users around the world. It is available as -both free in cost (free as in free beer) and in modification and +project contributed to by many users around the world. It is available as +both free in cost (free as in free beer) and in modification and redistribution rights (free as in free speech) to end users, -provided that the original software license is included and/or +provided that the original software license is included and/or viewable by users of modified or redistributed versions. -If you'd like to contribute to the Freedoom project, please check out the -https://github.com/freedoom/freedoom[project's page], +If you’d like to contribute to the Freedoom project, please check out the +https://github.com/freedoom/freedoom[project’s page], https://www.doomworld.com/forum/17-freedoom/[discussion forum], and https://discord.gg/9DA3fut[discord chat]. @@ -688,7 +689,7 @@ https://guides.github.com/activities/forking/[How to fork a project and create a == Reusing portions of Freedoom == Since https://freedoom.github.io/about.html[Freedoom is free], some other -projects have used Freedoom's assets. We think this is a great use of the +projects have used Freedoom’s assets. We think this is a great use of the project and should be encouraged. If you use portions of Freedoom in your project, please let us know by filing an issue or pull request on -https://github.com/freedoom/freedoom.github.io[Freedoom's website project page] +https://github.com/freedoom/freedoom.github.io[Freedoom’s website project page]